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RE: Seeking art for Xonotic based project - unfa - 06-07-2014
Thanks, aa that's some solid feedback
I've realised how slow and sluggy is this track, after I came to listen to it after "Taste Thermite". I gotta kick up the tempo and rehash this one too. But that'd be some other day. Seeping time!
RE: Seeking art for Xonotic based project - unfa - 06-10-2014
(06-05-2014, 01:07 PM)aa Wrote: This has got some nice sounding parts, but generally it is quite dull. Could use some more interesting stuff and a faster pace. Around 2:50 and afterwards is cool, could use more of that, but more and faster.
4:25 and the like don't actually fit for a fast paced game.
5:21 is also too slow, if sped and juiced up could be much better.
Yes, you said it is non-complex, but that makes it less interesting in my opinion.
In the very begging, i think it could be slightly heavier or contrasting.
1:08, the "dzing" sound could be used more.
Just tried playing with it, and it creates a calming feeling, not sure it fits in the current state.
I think some heavier parts and higher notes in some places will make it better.
I've just started a version A01 based on v. 10 - I've rised the tempo from 133 to 144 (feels faster but no unnatural - I tried 150 and I didn't feel good to me).
Also I'm gonna rework some stuff and try adding much variation and some more interesting and aggressive parts.
I'm bearing your feedback in mind, aa - thank you for that
RE: Seeking art for Xonotic based project - unfa - 06-10-2014
I've created a separate thread for "Rocket Jump" developement to not clutter this one:
http://forums.xonotic.org/showthread.php?tid=4962