06-11-2012, 06:55 AM
Okay, I'm after quick run. I don't know dong about layouts for Unreal-Quake games, but some things are universal.
Gun placement - could you indicate it more? Like some special platform, textures, spot light:
![[Image: Ro6bP.jpg]](http://i.imgur.com/Ro6bP.jpg)
![[Image: cgPOa.jpg]](http://i.imgur.com/cgPOa.jpg)
Not all teleporters are indicated properly:
![[Image: zm93C.jpg]](http://i.imgur.com/zm93C.jpg)
![[Image: tSxjF.jpg]](http://i.imgur.com/tSxjF.jpg)
Map is empty and very similar to other Xonotic maps in terms of texutres - check Trak's GPLed texture packs:
http://www.trak.mercenariesguild.net/node/3
And make use of them, alternate a little in GIMP and you have completely new set of textures :} Placing a lot of different crates will be easiest part.
Overall, level is very solid, it will pwn in CTF for sure. Geometry of brushes is bad, but I have sent you link to tutorial to fix it easily.
You could use some tcmod_scroll to bring life to Abyss. Some glowing/moving textures on generators, power pipes, etc.
I suggest making quick sweep for better trims:
![[Image: D3IXz.jpg]](http://i.imgur.com/D3IXz.jpg)
![[Image: 8VoSJ.jpg]](http://i.imgur.com/8VoSJ.jpg)
Good level, work on it!
Gun placement - could you indicate it more? Like some special platform, textures, spot light:
Not all teleporters are indicated properly:
Map is empty and very similar to other Xonotic maps in terms of texutres - check Trak's GPLed texture packs:
http://www.trak.mercenariesguild.net/node/3
And make use of them, alternate a little in GIMP and you have completely new set of textures :} Placing a lot of different crates will be easiest part.
Overall, level is very solid, it will pwn in CTF for sure. Geometry of brushes is bad, but I have sent you link to tutorial to fix it easily.
You could use some tcmod_scroll to bring life to Abyss. Some glowing/moving textures on generators, power pipes, etc.
I suggest making quick sweep for better trims:
Good level, work on it!