unfa's music | Space Pirates (v.04)

to the new version: you made the basic sound more dull (?) (you can hear the difference in the first 3 seconds). that is very good imo.

Yay, I have added some equalisation to the main bass instrument in .4. I think this way it sounds more "dirty". Anyway in .5 I've added some higher frequencies to add more shape to this.

i would suggest that you make this new, high pitched sound at the beginning more clean, atm it is quite scratchy.

Done. Now it sounds much smoother.

and imo the parts from 2:08 to 2:58 is too messy. the sound which is going from left to right and back all the time is disturbing; maybe you could try it without the left-right-change?

Messy part unmessed. I was worried of it by my self before Thanks for giving me impulse to fix that
Panning effect made slight to not disturb.

additionally you made the whole track a bit louder. revert that!

Oh, yeah. Loudness war is dangerous. Need to be careful Gonna turn it down a bit... oh, I forgot to do it. In .6 it won't be so loud

and the end is wonderful for looping

after a bit tweaking this has to go into xonotic this is really good.

Thank you very much

23.3 is probably the best of the two versions, but I don't think it would hurt to have both in the game.

Could you say some more, why do you prefer .3? That would be helpful I hope you'll like the .5 even more

23.5
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