some notes: the main bassdrum has a tone, although most drums are more "toneless", and this tone is additionally not harmonic with the rest.
i dont like it when the bassdrum is fast (e.g. at 0:10). the drum is really cool from 1:36 on, because it is more continous (?). could you try changing it to a real beat, which is more continous ? (i mean not "bum....bumbum....bumbum..." but "bum..bum..bum..bum") maybe this would make it feel faster which could fit better to the gameplay.
the sound at 0:41 starts too abrupt imho. it's sometimes too loud imo, e.g. at 2:00 or 2:13
the sound which starts at 1:08 is really cool
but when it plays the "melody" at 1:36, i would like you to try making this sound more... clean... i mean, don't change it's loudness (but i dont know if its better then )
but please don't just follow my suggestions the outcome would be a mix of your style and my opnion, other opinions are needed as well
i dont like it when the bassdrum is fast (e.g. at 0:10). the drum is really cool from 1:36 on, because it is more continous (?). could you try changing it to a real beat, which is more continous ? (i mean not "bum....bumbum....bumbum..." but "bum..bum..bum..bum") maybe this would make it feel faster which could fit better to the gameplay.
the sound at 0:41 starts too abrupt imho. it's sometimes too loud imo, e.g. at 2:00 or 2:13
the sound which starts at 1:08 is really cool
but when it plays the "melody" at 1:36, i would like you to try making this sound more... clean... i mean, don't change it's loudness (but i dont know if its better then )but please don't just follow my suggestions
the outcome would be a mix of your style and my opnion, other opinions are needed as well
