Create an account


Thread Rating:
  • 0 Vote(s) - 0 Average
  • 1
  • 2
  • 3
  • 4
  • 5
[DUEL] Fast Death

#1
[Image: fast_death.jpg]

Fast Death
It's a small duel and dm map with very fast gameplay.
I hope you enjoy it! Have fun!

If the map is toooo boring for you:
r_fullbright 1
v_psycho 1

Download:

.pk3   FastDeathRZDE.pk3 (Size: 990.02 KB / Downloads: 22)

Screenshots:
screen1
screen2
screen3
screen4
MY NOOB STATS:
[Image: 788.png]
Reply

#2
Nicely designed, but I would reconsider the size of it. It seems too cramped. I will write bigger feedback very soon.
Reply

#3
Maybe should be just duplicated at the middle-area-thing...
like this:
[Image: fastdeathr2layout.png]
MY NOOB STATS:
[Image: 788.png]
Reply

#4
As I promised, bigger feedback for you:

Too narrow corridors:
[Image: xonotic20120913113930-00.jpg]
And here:
[Image: xonotic20120913113954-00.jpg]

Your duplicating idea seems wise, hovewer: Are you going to merge the middle? (Its hard to say from your sketch)
[Image: xonotic20120913114021-00.jpg]

One way in, one way out. It seems extremly simple and well narrow again:
[Image: xonotic20120913114058-00.jpg]

The map is small, then players would rather grabbed every item with ease:
[Image: xonotic20120913114137-00.jpg]
I would avoid such itemplacement.

I can't tell you more right now, Im waiting for next version. Good luck with your map!
Reply

#5
Wow, this map really is tiny! I agree with Justin. Atm, the scale feels all wrong.
Reply



Possibly Related Threads…
Thread Author Replies Views Last Post
  [Duel] Mint (was: [Duel] Unnamed WIP map) monad 10 13,578 07-31-2015, 02:54 PM
Last Post: monad

Forum Jump:


Users browsing this thread:
1 Guest(s)

Forum software by © MyBB original theme © iAndrew 2016, remixed by -z-