Wow, nice to see that you are working with Blender too and got this great result so far! One thing that bugs me is the colour concept in your animation. There is too much variation (green, yellow, orange, white, blue, cyan, rust). Stick to the main colours (blue and orange) from the logo and only use small shades if needed.
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